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Post by Dick Devereaux on Sept 1, 2016 18:59:39 GMT -6
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Toast
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Toasty!
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Post by Toast on Sept 10, 2016 19:44:51 GMT -6
Do you want me to like your character? Because that's how you get me to like your character!
I enjoy the fierce attitude and likely insane outlook that this guy has. I did enjoy the straight trash talk, as it is something I feel today's e-wrestling world is missing. Very good on that part and you put some good focus on your opponent and the match. I would like to suggest to add maybe just a little bit of a background scene so we know where he is, even if this promo is taking place in some backstage area or something. A little can go a long way.
Keep it up dude!
TOAST RATING: 🍞🍞🍞
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