If you would like Roleplay Feedback...
Jul 21, 2016 16:54:40 GMT -6
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Post by Sabrina Everett on Jul 21, 2016 16:54:40 GMT -6
Okay,
Let me pre-empt this with the statement that I am NOT doing this in some - I am sooo much better than you, you need my help, blablabla - way.
For the last 2/3 years my primary role in feds has been constructive feedback using a base rubric I have built up over time and honestly, it's always gone down pretty well and it's something I enjoy doing.. I read every RP over at least twice anyway so, I thought I would offer up this particular skill-set of mine to HW lol.
Full disclosure, sometimes I can be a little blunt - I am NEVER being a bitch just to be a bitch - everything in a feedback thread is meant to be constructive and pure insight in my opinion, it's not gospel, it's not the 'opinion of the fed' it's just my opinion lol.
So anyway - the point of this thread is to say that if anyone DOES want feedback, at any point... please do comment below (And what RP you want it on once we're going forward and people have more RPs under their belts here).
Now, here is my basic rubric that I use for all my feedback:
Creativity: 5
What this means: This is NOT purely originality based, but more how well you craft the story, am I captivated? Do I care? - this score is purely based on skill level.
Originality: 5
Have you done a story like this already? Does your character stand out? - this score is based on how well who your character is stands out to me.
Characterization in Promo: 5
How 'in character' is your promo work? Are you showing me who your character is on screen? - this score is based on how well your on-screen persona shows in your promo work.
Promo/Trash Talk: 10
Do you understand your opponent? Are you making well informed and precise shots? Is everything within the parameters of what your character would say? - this score is based on how well you trash talk.
Characterization in Story: 5
Do you show a contrast between on screen and IRL? Can I see your characters morality (or lack of)? Do I REALLY understand who your character is? - This score is based on how well you sell your character.
Story: 10 -
Do you have a good, engaging storyline? Do you make me care your character? Or hate them? Or root for them? - this score is based on how engaging and thorough your story is.
Continuity: 5
Do you carry your story over week to week? - Do you continue to show growth in your character?
Styling & Flow: 5
Are you keeping coding to a minimum? Are you over-running your stuff with media? Does it flow as a piece? - this is based on how well you present your piece.
Alignment/Gimmick: 10
Do YOU know who your character is? Does your RP as a piece represent the alignment and gimmick laid out for your character?
Feuds/Angles/Co-ordinations: 5
Are you selling your feud? Do you have an ongoing storyline with others you are displaying here? - If this is a tag match, are you acknowledging your team mate? - Does your RP further the character as a whole, and not just work for this week?
Effort/Personal Improvement: 5
This is my 'grade on a curve' score - can I see effort was made? Is this something that looks thrown together? - this score is basically just, did you try and create a good piece, or just half-ass it?
Balance: 5
Pieces should be balanced, the CD and the Trash should be complimentary and not one out-weigh the other.
Research & Knowledge: 10
Self explanatory - if your RP is riddled with inaccuracies, or shows a lack of research/understanding of your opponent, you won't do well here
Believability: 5
Fantasy pieces etc. still apply here, it is not believability as in - can that every really happen - it is believability as in, realism within each characters universe.... you cannot be captain of a pirate ship one week and then queen of the faeries the next... This goes further than continuity and is - based on previous RPs is what you are doing now, feasible for your character?
Match Relevancy: 5
When speaking about your opponent, are you making it wrestling relevant? Insults are great but they aren't everything - are you making your stuff applicable to a wrestling setting?
Enjoyability: 5
Did I like it? - That simple lol
So yeah - every RP will come with a score out of 100 and then indepth notes as to how I came to each individual score, suggestions for improvement (where applicable) and that kind of thing.
Again, this is only for people that actually want to hear my opinions lol so feel free to sign up for it below - OR - if you don't want public feedback, PM me here or get me on Twitter
Let me pre-empt this with the statement that I am NOT doing this in some - I am sooo much better than you, you need my help, blablabla - way.
For the last 2/3 years my primary role in feds has been constructive feedback using a base rubric I have built up over time and honestly, it's always gone down pretty well and it's something I enjoy doing.. I read every RP over at least twice anyway so, I thought I would offer up this particular skill-set of mine to HW lol.
Full disclosure, sometimes I can be a little blunt - I am NEVER being a bitch just to be a bitch - everything in a feedback thread is meant to be constructive and pure insight in my opinion, it's not gospel, it's not the 'opinion of the fed' it's just my opinion lol.
So anyway - the point of this thread is to say that if anyone DOES want feedback, at any point... please do comment below (And what RP you want it on once we're going forward and people have more RPs under their belts here).
Now, here is my basic rubric that I use for all my feedback:
Creativity: 5
What this means: This is NOT purely originality based, but more how well you craft the story, am I captivated? Do I care? - this score is purely based on skill level.
Originality: 5
Have you done a story like this already? Does your character stand out? - this score is based on how well who your character is stands out to me.
Characterization in Promo: 5
How 'in character' is your promo work? Are you showing me who your character is on screen? - this score is based on how well your on-screen persona shows in your promo work.
Promo/Trash Talk: 10
Do you understand your opponent? Are you making well informed and precise shots? Is everything within the parameters of what your character would say? - this score is based on how well you trash talk.
Characterization in Story: 5
Do you show a contrast between on screen and IRL? Can I see your characters morality (or lack of)? Do I REALLY understand who your character is? - This score is based on how well you sell your character.
Story: 10 -
Do you have a good, engaging storyline? Do you make me care your character? Or hate them? Or root for them? - this score is based on how engaging and thorough your story is.
Continuity: 5
Do you carry your story over week to week? - Do you continue to show growth in your character?
Styling & Flow: 5
Are you keeping coding to a minimum? Are you over-running your stuff with media? Does it flow as a piece? - this is based on how well you present your piece.
Alignment/Gimmick: 10
Do YOU know who your character is? Does your RP as a piece represent the alignment and gimmick laid out for your character?
Feuds/Angles/Co-ordinations: 5
Are you selling your feud? Do you have an ongoing storyline with others you are displaying here? - If this is a tag match, are you acknowledging your team mate? - Does your RP further the character as a whole, and not just work for this week?
Effort/Personal Improvement: 5
This is my 'grade on a curve' score - can I see effort was made? Is this something that looks thrown together? - this score is basically just, did you try and create a good piece, or just half-ass it?
Balance: 5
Pieces should be balanced, the CD and the Trash should be complimentary and not one out-weigh the other.
Research & Knowledge: 10
Self explanatory - if your RP is riddled with inaccuracies, or shows a lack of research/understanding of your opponent, you won't do well here
Believability: 5
Fantasy pieces etc. still apply here, it is not believability as in - can that every really happen - it is believability as in, realism within each characters universe.... you cannot be captain of a pirate ship one week and then queen of the faeries the next... This goes further than continuity and is - based on previous RPs is what you are doing now, feasible for your character?
Match Relevancy: 5
When speaking about your opponent, are you making it wrestling relevant? Insults are great but they aren't everything - are you making your stuff applicable to a wrestling setting?
Enjoyability: 5
Did I like it? - That simple lol
So yeah - every RP will come with a score out of 100 and then indepth notes as to how I came to each individual score, suggestions for improvement (where applicable) and that kind of thing.
Again, this is only for people that actually want to hear my opinions lol so feel free to sign up for it below - OR - if you don't want public feedback, PM me here or get me on Twitter